evaluation commentery

·         Title – unchaste means …. incest

·         Intro – I looked at… raging ball, resivoire dogs, lord of war, lost in translation, momento,

·         Track – paul mcarthney original, sung by the faces – baby I’m amazed

·         Filmed in bushey – royal Connaught park – through viv, Jacuzzi didn’t work, had to get permission

·         Got intro trouble for having glasses in the Jacuzzi – one bit of glass cracked and fell in the water but we found it

·         Wary of not making it feel like a music video

·         Looked at hot tub scenes

·         Dumb and dumber – mad man –spring breakers -  Austin powers -  scarface –

·         Mirrored shot – like scarface

·         Mum screaming name in the background

·         Ali g shot under covers

·         Used icing sugar

·         Wet head to resemble his dream being in the water

·         Vodka on the floor – alcoholic

·         Cut out bathroom scene, dragged along

·         Toaster is weird – sci-fi, flows with alex doing his zip up

·         After effects – 5500+ frames to cut out with the rota tool

·         Two shots framed exactly the same – 1) alex eating toast alone 2) mum pretending to nag alex, she wrote down a list before of things to say and I prompted her when she forgot so she didn’t ever run out

·         Wanting to incorporate Darren aronofsky with close ups of car shots

·         Played the faces baby I’m amazed in the background as the radio

·         Changged the effects of highpass

·         Put in a conversation about football with ray parlour

·         I wasa inspired by the wrestler, lots of walking behind the character. It’s slow paced but you feel like your with the character

·         Forgot to record sound for the train so had to find sound

·         Took the football chants from the bbc cds

·         Girl sitting in the fields, eating the same fruit as his dream in the Jacuzzi, it’s the same girl, vodka – hes an alcoholic

·         We made a proper picnic

·         Got kicked off the football pitch they saidi t cost £400 to rent so we sat by the side

·         Played around with hues and saturation, was thinking black and white at one point, but I added a vignette, dimmed down the saturation and enhanced the contrast a little bit

·         Was tough weather, windy so the sound was shit, and there were tons of clouds so difficult to keep the right exposure

·         Didn’t help that alex was pretty crap at kick ups and scoring into an empty net

·         The point of this was to express  a nightmare, in your dream it seems like its impossible to get any words out sometimes so I wanted to explore this

·         Before he gets a chance to speak she completely ignores him

·         He wakes up at the next station and gets asked by a random passanger to move his bag – so irelevent – so annoying!

·         Friend of mine from round the corner, I told him to wear smart to look like a randomer

·         We had to consider getting on the train where it could potentially under a bridge otherwise the exposure would be too dark

·         We can see liv in the window getting on the train, just to throw the viewer off a little bit.

·         Put s sound effect of a steam train behind it squeeking it wheels to enhance alex’s state of mind

·         I had absolutely no permission to film underground

·         Used the bbc sound effects for a squeaky escalator

·         Got told off by under cover, I aoppologised and asked if I could do one more shot – didn’t use it in the film

·         We met my friend Jamie here, the whole who got on the train with liv, it is his un.

·         I printed off a poster to stick on a door, didn’t realise how packed it was so we used another door

·         There was a ramp to the entrance for the uni with glass walls, so I went behind it, put theb poster in front and pretended I was behind the door as Alex approached it

·         I wanetd Alex entering and exiting the newsagent from one shot to look like he went in god the drink n

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·         came out really quickly

·         My friends dads shop

·         Liv had a henna I wasnted to encorporate it

·         Low extreme shot I see in terry Gilliam films

·         I put an echo effect on, along with a ventilating maching in the back ground with a heartbeat fromthe hostpital cd that mike has

·         It was all filmed 50fps s I could quicken up and slow down footage.

·         Looked at lost in translation introduction for help with the moving camera shots

·         Bought a taxi been and taxi sound offline

·         Put kiddy sound effects behind the mcdonald advert

·         Final scene filmed at royal Connaught park

·         Dreamy looking trees with dangly leaves